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Well If I had to grade it so far I would have to say Dino charge gets an A in my opinion. the fights are fun and engaging, the monsters are unique and the Actors are believeable in their roles.  I Just caught the last 2 episodes of the first half recently and I am eagerly awaiting part 2.

I will say that I am a tad upset to see Sledge get defeated so soon though I liked the idea of a bounty hunter villain but who knows perhaps he isn't totally done yet, he could come back sometime in Supercharge.

If not we got Heckyl/Snide as a villain. Not sure what to make of him yet but from what I saw from Heckyl he is Extremely strong and could be quite a villain. There are 2 energems left to find and I am eager to see who the Silver and Aqua rangers will be.

so Who else thinks Supercharge will be as epic as the first half? I sure hope so at least.
OC created Imperial arms / Teigu.

1. The Guardian of the time stream, Chronos.  A long spear shaped Imperial arms which was forged out of Orichalcum. The spear tip is held in place by a dragon head shaped guard while a skull shaped weight balances the weapon out on the opposite end. Its main power is that when the spear tip is clanged on the ground it is able to trap anyone with in a "Time lock." field. People who are captured inside this lock are unable to move or speak at all but are completely aware of what is happening to them. Only the user can move themselves or enemies in this lock. When the spear is clanged again the lock is broken.  The skull head weight at the end contains the eyes of a Danger beast which grants the user limited sight into possible future out comes using this power however is taxing and can eventually lead to blindness.

2. The Divine rain, Artemis.  A set of darts which have been dipped in an assortment of highly toxic poisons, most of which were made from Danger beast bloods mixed together. When thrown the darts zero in on thier target by following thier Aura's trail like miniature heat seekers once the target is piarced, death normally comes with in seconds.

3. The Splitter of Continents, Atlas. An oversized pair of boots which are able to crush anything beneath them with ease, be it a human skull, or even a Diamond. Like with Incursio they are extremely taxing on the human body and a normal person wouldn't even be able to stand the incredible pressure from having them on let alone even able to move a single step.

4. The Demonic white serpent of nightmares, Chondaria. An organic Imperial arms which takes the form of a  large white horned serpent. Chondaria zeroes in on what an opponent fears the most out of everything in this world. Then using its eyes shows the person that image while simaltaniusly squeezing the the life from them.  Chondaria grows more powerful the stronger willed its victim is. Other then its fear gazing and incredible squeezing power its fangs are also sharp as swords and able to slice through armor, flesh, and bone.

5. The Breath of the spirits, Charity. A golden Urn shaped Imperial arms, when un corked it creates either a vacuum or fan effect on the wind in the area which can either cause a hurricane force windstorm or draw people inside of itself. Those unlucky enough to be drawn inside of Charity are never heard from again. Inside this Urn they are doomed to wander with in a void of darkness and howling winds forever until death.

6. The Forge of heroes, Solaris. A Hammer shaped Imperial arms, Solaris is special Imperial arms in an of itself. As it is a dual purpose weapon while yes it is able to pulverize whatever person, Danger beast, or other object is unlucky enough to come into its path but its true power lies in its abilty to build and repair what the user in visions with in thier mind. This is also extended to other Imperial arms. There are limits to what it can repair however in regards to damage.

7. The Vanguard of eternal Darkness, Shadowhaunt. A blood type Imperial arms which grants the drinker complete mastery over any any all shadows with in thier area. This includes the shadows of thier enemies. Ablilies of this strange arms are mostly unknown but what is known is that the user is able to steal the shadows of thier enemies by taking them into thier own  which issues in instant death and  greater strength for the user. It is symbolized by a crest resembling bull like horns on the drinker's forehead.

8. The Punisher of the wicked, Tartaros. A bull whip shaped Imperial arms which is lined with razor sharp spikes and points made of bone that were extracted from a Danger beast. This gives the weapon the appearance of a spinal cord. The tip of the whip is also forged from Orichalcum.
OC created Imperial arms / Teigu.
Ok Recently I have gotten into this new Manga / Anime called " Akame ga Kill!" and I have to say I enjoy both the series and the animation. Especially the weapons in it because they use things you never would of expected and the lore of how they were created.  this is a short run down of a few I came up with, Hopefully they are good

the only one that isn't my own creation is " The Vanguard of eternal Darkness, Shadowhaunt." that was one I helped my friend CRB145 come up with and even then all I suggested was the name.

I DO NOT own any rights to Akame ga kill!! in any way shape or form what so ever.
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"Heeeyaaaghaaaa!!!" Yawned Lance as he slowly started to arise from his peaceful night's slumber, rubbing his eyes as he cracked his neck and back into place. "Ahh now that is what I call a good night's sleep." Said the young Neathian man "Oh man Finally! Lance Listen I gotta tell you something super Important right now!" said Terraroid in a concerned voice as he floated up off of the dresser top on the other side of the bed room he shared with his partner. Softly on Lance's shoulder the red and black haired young man who was still half asleep couldn't really hear what the little red Chinese dragon like bakugan was saying. "Yeesh, major bed head." he muttered, grabbing a new change of clothes from his dresser drawer, his hair jel,and favorite brush "Shower time for me!" He said heading out of the room and straight for the bathroom. "Lance! Dude have you been listening to me at all sheesh! This is a more pressing matter then your morning Shower!!" growled Terraroid. "Look buddy chill out what ever it is I am sure it can wait." Lance said with his usual relaxed tone and smerk. "No. No it can't look I messed up big time and should of reminded you of this like 2-" Terraroid sadly never had a chance to finish his sentence as his partner closed the door and he heard the sound of the bathroom radio along with the water start up which was a crystal clear sign that he was Incomunicado until a good hour and a half later. "Weeks ago."  finished the Pyrus Bakugan. "You forgot to remind Lance about today didn't you." said Neo, a darkus Dragon like Bakugan as she appeared with her partner Ryuji, Lance's roommate  in toe His   purple and black hair covering over his right eye as usual, He let out a groan of irratation as he took a swig of coffee. "Man he  is gonna be kicking himself in the ass when he gets outta there. " he muttered. "He's gonna be kicking himself in the ass? That will be nothing compared to what you Know who is going to do to him if She finds out." Fabia, thier other roommate said as she passed him by.

About this time Lance was starting to get a strange feeling that he had forgotten something about today, what exactly that was though was a mystery to him. "Was today the day the rent was due?" No it couldn't of been that, he kept that date logged in his memory firmly in place. "Did I have a dentist appointment today, a haircut, was there a tournament or something?"  Something about the tournament did seem to trigger something from deep in his mind, but that wasn't it persay. "I had practice with Dan and the gang today? Or was it the day I was suppose to help out ARIA?!?!?!?!! GYAAHHHHHHHHHGH!!!!!!!!" Lance yelled at the top of his lungs  which Echoed through the apartment.  Out in the living room, Both Ryuji and Fabia sat with thier Bakugans nodding solmenly and silently. "He remembered." Fabia said. "Yep, I'd say so." Ryuji agreed. Lance wasted no time in getting dried off and clothes before shooting down the hallway and skidding to a hault right in the doorway to the living room. " Aria! Today! Big problem! Me! Forget! In trouble!!!!" Lance babbled, his eyes darting over to the calender beside him.  Sure enough it was, December 21st, Aria's Birthday. " Dude, heh heh you are soooooo dead." Ryuji chuckled leaning back in his chair.  Lance looked to Fabia for reassurence but she just shrugged and grinned along with Ryuji, "Don't look at me. I tried to remind you like 3 times about today. Lot more then this little one here." She said pointing at Terraroid who was now trying to use Aranaut as a sort of  "Baku shield".   Lance let out a groan and started pacing back and forth across the room. Fortunately it was still early which meant there was a fairly good chance his girlfriend wasn't even awake yet, but her cousins should be. "Gimme the Phone." He said, quickly dialing Dan's place, "Dan for once pick up the freaking Phone." he said  waiting for the line to connect. "Hello? Lance, Man where the hell are you?! You were suppose to be here half an Hour ago!" Dan snapped at him. Lance explained how his Idiot roommates should of tried harder to remind him about today, "Idiot roommates, piff! I'm not the one who forgot my Girlfriend's birthday was today either."  Ryuji   whispered.  

"Well thankfully for you. She is still asleep so you have time to get over here and help me Distract her while Mom and Sora call the others to help set up her Party tonight." Dan told him. Lance felt a huge wave of stress come lifting off his shoulders once he heard that "I hope you didn't forget to come up with a distraction too."  Which he did but he couldn't let Dan know that. "Umm, Umm Of course I didn't! I, I, I got a great plan! And Aria will love it that is for sure!" he said. Dan wasn't sold at all but right now wasn't the time to argue. "Just get over here Now, please." Lance nodded and clicked off the Phone then grabbed Terraroid and put him on his shoulder "Come on you two we gotta motor, and figure out a way to keep Aria away from the house for the day. " he said. "Wait  a minute this is your mess to have to clean up." said Fabia. "Yes but you guys should of tried harder like I said to remind me  beforehand. So this is your guys faults too."  Lance countered. " How did you come to that conclusion?" Neo asked. " All I know is that If I go down I'm taking you all with me!!!"  Like lightning the three Neathians and thier Bakugans were at Dan's place, panting heavily at the front door. "Next time I'm taking the Bus." Fabia  wheezed. "Ditto on that one." Ryuji said. Perhaps running all the way here without stopping to grab a bite to eat first wasn't Lance's best Idea,  his Stomach seemed to be yelling at him about as loud as Dan had been earlyer. " Yeah Yeah I know Shut up already." he  thought. As soon as the doorbell Rang Dan and Drago were right there and glad to see them. " Come on in, Aria is just getting out of the Shower now, good for you that she overslept too." Drago said. Lance got a bit of a kick out of that, he could picture the purple and teal haired girl   just rolling out of bed and bumping on the floor like she usually did. " She and I really are 2 of the same kind." He thought. "I hope you came up with some kind of distraction like you said you would." Dan asked hopeful. "Umm well I suppose. We could... Umm, Maybe hit the battle arena in the mall per chance?" Lance said sweating a bit.  Fabia groaned and shook her head, that was the best Lance could come up with at the moment? Sure Ryuji and Dan thought it was a good idea but come on! Didn't these guys ever think about anything besides Brawling in thier free time?

"Oh Lance You're here!" said a sweet voice. Lance turned his head to the stair case and saw his girlfriend heading down to meet him as she swallowed him up in a hug. " Happy Birthday Babe." he said kissing her on the forehead and smiling. Aria blushed looking up at him. "Thanks."  Lance felt the same way about Aria as Dan and Shun did about Fabia and Sora, She was extremely precious to him and he wanted to do what ever he could to make her happy. He knew that Brawling was one of her favorite things ever, of course it didn't start out that way. When he first met her Aria didn't show much interest if any at all about Bakugan battles. It actually took quite a while to get her to try them out,and as expected she wasn't too good at first.  Be it at building a deck or finding her perfect attribute She needed quite a bit of help. That was where Lance came in, he became like her coach teaching her everything from the ground up Gate cards, ability cards, the different strengths and weaknesses of the attributes, all about Bakugan Traps and Battle gears... Everything.  It wasn't too long after that, he gave her Panzer, a wolf like Haos Bakugan from back on Neathia who quickly became her partner and friend. That was also the day he asked her if she would start going out with him.  Granted it had been quite the rocky road he hand't antisipated her temper or her stubborness but that was just something he had to admire and accept about her. " Heh come on I got an Itching for some Brawling!" He said   clenching his fists as he did so. " Oh, eager for another beat down are we? Guess I will just have to add another victory under my belt." Aria said. "Don't be so sure I got a few new tricks you haven't seen yet."  "But Lance, hasn't she beaten you like 10 times in the past month?" Dan snickered.   The red and black haired young man growled at this truth perhaps he had taught her a little too well honestly. " Don't be too proud Danny boy. I've beaten you like 12 Times this month." Fabia grinned  While Dan looked for a counter, Aria was already pulling Lance and Ryuji out the door and off to thier destination. " Come on already! The sooner we get there the sooner I get to winning!"

"Man talk about packed today." Said ryuji as the 5 of them made thier way through the parking lot into the enterance. "Bet Keith is loving this, he is bound to have tons of Customers at his shop today." Dan added. Keith ran a sort of  Bakugan shop inside the Mall, he did things like helped new players find thier partners and traps, sold and fixed battle gear, sold cards, launchers and holsters... so as long as the battle field was up an running you could gurentee that his shop was busy. " I gotta stop at Keith's while we are at it, Gotta pick up a little something I ordered a while ago." Lance said. The thing in question was Aria's birthday present, thankfully that was the one thing he did remember about today and in general. "I'm gonna go grab us a little something to munch on. I don't know about you guys but I hear my stomach calling my name." Said the Birthday girl  heading for the food court, With Fabia in toe. " We'll come meet you at Keith's place ok." She said.  The guys nodded and quickly made thier way up to the 3rd floor of the Mall. Not far from the Elevators was thier destination, "Baku Zone." Keith's store which true to form had a line of kids waiting to get inside and grab the latest upgrades they could. "Yo! Keith get your butt down here already!!!" Lance yelled "Remind me not to take any stealth jobs with you ok." Ryuji said   Lance just play punched his friend in the arm and took his place on the counter. "Ahh there ya are. Just the guy I was waiting for, I can only assume you are here to pick this little baby up." Keith said as he placed a small box on the counter. Inside it was a brand New battle gear he had developed and Lance had begged him to let him get one of early as his gift to Aria for today. " The Grand Chariot." Keith said as he typed up on the tablet next to him.

Bringing up a picture of Panzer equipped with the Gear, Grand Chariot looked like a large high powered cannon settled in the middle of his back while his shoulders were protected with thick armor that consealed two small blasters on each. Finally on his long tail was a sharp scythe like blade. " The gear's ablility card will add up to 200 extra Power to the user and with these cards it can be amped up for triple the effect. Just make sure to tell her that the recoil from the cannon is touchy so she needs to make sure her aim is spot on cause if not. It could bounce back and cause Panzer quite a bit of damage." Keith explained. A touchy gear for a trigger happy girl, Seemed like the perfect Gift to Lance. "I owe ya big time for this one man." He said as he paid for the gear and the cards. " Aria really is lucky to have a guy like you ya know Lance." Dan said. "Well she has done just as much for me as I have for her." The two of them had been dating for at least 3 years now and in that time Aria had been everything from a friend and battle partner, to a shoulder to cry on and a source of encouragement and strength. He had told her things that he hadn't anyone else and she had also done her best to help him get over the loss of his older brother as well. Aria often told him that Jin was still with him, watching over him like he had in thier childhood, she felt he would be proud of the man he had become. "She is the best thing that could of ever happened to me." He said which was also why he felt so damn bad about messing up and forgetting about today, " Sometimes I think she deserves better then me." Lance admitted. "Ok Now come on man Don't talk like that." Ryuji said  "Aria cares about you a lot I can tell. It was all over her face when you were holding her before back at my place." Dan added, "So you make a few mistakes here and there along the way what guy hasn't Trust me we may look good all the time but I have Pissed Fabs off royally before and she has me too we always forgive and forget though cause that is what love is about."  Love, neither of them had ever really said those words to each other before but he assumed that she knew he did by his actions. " Saying stuff like that is... well its just hard for me, doesn't feel right for some reason I don't know." Lance explained. " So what, Like I have said before, Actions speak louder then words sometimes." Terraroid  said.   "The things  you have done for her say it all."  Lance nodded slowly as he put a hand to his shoulder. " I am really sorry for not listening to you earlyer buddy and to to you and Fabs too Ryuji."  Ryuji shrugged and showed a rare smile towards his friend. " It's over and done with so let's forget about it." he said.

Not long after this Aria and Fabia finally returned to the others  bringing a few Donuts they had grabbed along the way. " Heh she knows me well." Lance thought. While Dan and the others talked with Keith. Lance pulled Aria aside and took her outside to a little quite spot out back of the mall, they stayed there for a bit munching on thier treats and talking and over all just having a great time like Always. " She is so sweet and kind. Not to mention great looking too, Guess I got the golden ticket when you finally picked me." He thought. "Lance, I know you are uncomfortable saying stuff like I love you and  pet names but that doesn't matter to me as long as I know I am important to you and that you care  that is enough." she thought. "Hey guess it is about time I give you this too." Lance said as he handed Aria the box containing her battle gear and cards. As soon as she saw them her eyes lit up wide but even more so when she found the small scrap of paper hidden in the lining. She un folded it quickly and read the message there in.

"To the girl who makes me feel like the luckiest guy on any world. I know I am a block head and forgetful. But I thank my lucky stars every time I am able to kiss you.  You are not just my girl but also my best friend.

I love you. Aria.

From Lance."

Aria's eyes started to water a bit as Lance leaned in and kissed her on the mouth.  It wasn't an extremely long one but it carried with it no less emotion and it carried most of all the thing that he needed to know. " I love you too, Lance." was what it said. " Hey let's quit wasting time and go test this baby out already!" said the Birthday girl, heading back inside. " Sure if you are that eager to get beat!" " Oh not gonna happen!!" she laughed. Yes  some people feel comfortable speaking thier emotions while others show it in other ways. Regardless of which though as long as they are respected and returned it doesn't matter.
For Mimzy94.
Just a small birthday gift for a very good friend of mine. I hope you like it, sadly I had to leave a lot out because of my computer going crazy on me as I was writing it. but I may do some more closer to new years.

hope you have a happy birthday and enjoy it though.
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For a minute there it was like my entire world just froze up, Everything around me was still but my mind was doing the exact opposite it was racing like a car at the Daytona speed way race track.  As for words I was completely at a loss for them, Runo chuckled slightly as she walked over to me with her arms behind her back, "You look like you just saw a ghost or something, Dan everything alright?" she asked me. "Umm he's just not use to being up this early is all." I heard Drago reply. "I can understand that." I noticed that Runo's hair was a lot shorter then it had been since I saw her last, but then again people's looks did change quite a bit when you haven't seen them for 3 years.  Eventually I could feel myself returning to normal, my ability to talk returning as well. "Ugh, we, we'd better get going, those doors are gonna open soon and when they do we'll need a place to stay outta the way of all these crazy shoppers."  I muttered starting off to the back of the store rather quickly, not checking to see if she was following or not I wasn't really as ok as I was letting on before all I could really wonder was what in the hell was she doing here now after all this time?

"5,4,3,2,1. ALL RIGHT FOLKS THE DOORS ARE OFFICIALLY OPEN, MUCKLEHONEY TOYS INC WELCOMES YOU ALL TO OUR ANNUAL BLACK FRIDAY SUPERSALE!!!!!!!" Called Mr. Mucklehoney over a bull horn as the doors to his store opened, just like that the huge crowd was off like a pack of dogs after a stray cat. People almost immidately started grabbing carts and running down Aisles searching for the items on thier lists they were after, all around the mall other doors were doing the same, needless to say it was very quickly turning into a mad house. " Whoa, whoa, whoa, one at a time one at a time! There's enough to go around already!" Shun muttered as he struggled to maintain his balance while carrying a heavy load of  boxes and making his way through a small but extremely rowdy and energized group of little kids, each and every one of them was pawing to get at the box he held. Sora wasn't fairing much better either, just keeping toys on the shelves was hard enough right now one minute they were there all neat and organized like they were suppose to be then the next minute totally ravaged, ransacked, and stripped bare down to the metal shelves they sat on.  "Holy macaroni on Rye! Is it just me or is this an especially bad season?!?!" she called over to Shun.  "Geh! There is such a thing as a good season? Let go of my foot ya little sugar crazed monster!!" he said shaking his leg. Sora did her best to get her box unloaded as fast as she could, then quickly grabbed Shun's left hand and pulled him and herself to a free safe spot. "Thought they were gonna tear my leg off there for a minute!" He said. "You two ok in there?" asked the black haired boy to his partners. Ingram and Hawktor were hidden down in his jacket pocket for safety. The way these kids were right now  anything that looked brightly colored and shiny was a prime target to get snatched up. Sora had taken extra care as to keep Gayle safe, placing the green Ventus dragonoid in her inner coat pocket. "What in the heck were we thinking when we said we would be with you today?!?!" he asked.  "I'm starting to think we shouldn't of brought you along either."  She panted.   "Let's just hope the others are doing better then we are about now." Shun said  "Honestly I am more worried about what my Mom is doing out there in the mall."  Sora groaned.

"Outta my way outta my way its mine I saw it first!!!" yelled Mrs. Kuso  as she   fought her way through the aisled of a home goods store tightly clutching a brand new coffee pot to her chest like it was a priceless gem she had found. "50% Off for this baby and like hell I am gonna let any of you screaming banshees get the last one!! Honey heads up coming at you from 3 :00  clock high!!!"  she called, tossing the box over head of the mob and to her raggered looking husband who did his best not to drop it and place it in the cart. "Meet me over in the dinner wear section in 20 minutes I've gotta check out this deal on  new throw pillows  first!!" All Mr. Kuso could do was pant and give a weak thumbs up  while gripping the handle of his cart. "Well this is my cardio for the day." he said  the cart he held was carrying not only the new coffee pot but also a fondue set and a new juicer as well.  Looking on at his wife battling her way through the mass of angry determined shoppers. He did have to admire that fiery spirit she had as she went for her goals. "You are definately Dan and Sora's mom.  But seeing you this into it is still a little scary."  he thought to himself.  Not long after that  Baron and Ace appeared this time riding along on Segways, Both Nemus and Percival riding on thier shoulders. " Ok people let's all just calm down a little bit shall we no need to go bananas is there?!" Ace said. " HEY!!! You heard the man simmer down or get outta here!!" Baron bellowed.  Ace whipped his head around and shot him a quick glare. " You dumbass! I didn't say that  you want them to go after us too?!"  Baron puffed up his chest and adjusted his security guard badge before replying. " They gotta learn Ace my friend, you and I. We're the law around this mall and what we say goes."  Ace rubbed his now aching head, this was the very thing that got them fired from Grub bucket, Baron going off and doing something stupid that would no doubt back fire and result in mass destruction or injury along the way. "Look dude, we're tight and all but if you think for one minute I am going in to that mad house of a store you have got another-" Ace never finished his sentence after that. Baron immidately whipped out his whistle and blasted it as loud as he could before  rushing into the store. " Stop!! Stop in the name of an independantly funded and under manned mall security force!!"  Baron then launched himself head first into the mass of people which resulted in him taking quite a beating from the shoppers there in. Ace sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose while trying to not act embaressed. "Why do you hang out with him Ace?" Percival asked.  "I am starting to wonder that myself."   Around this time Mrs. Kuso had fought her way free but sadly had missed out on both the Throw pillows and the new plates so she was a little pissed about that. " Ok let's go! We can still make it down to Gadget town and see about this new Blu rey player for 60% off and they also have a deal going.  Buy 3 disks get 2 free!" she said announcing her game plan. "Gyahhh wah haa ha ha!!! Oof!!!" Baron grunted as he skid along the white tiled floor after being thrown out of the store Nemus panted on his shoulder where he hung from. "Oh, Hey Mrs. K, say by any chance are you still mad about yesterday, Ya know where I flooded your bathroom and instead of helping clean up I just took off?"   Baron asked. " Hisssssss!!!!" Went the woman in anger. "Yep, I'd say she is still mad." Ace chuckled.

"Alrighty that is more or less all you have to do." I said briskly to Runo, I'm not going to lie being around her and having to train her was really really akward, I kept looking over my shoulder to make sure Fabia didn't see anything. Now cheating on her was the absolute last thing I would do. Runo and I were totally done with that part of our lives. Honestly I guess I was still a little resentful of her for what she did to me all those years ago. "Hemm really well this can't be that hard." she said opening a box of stuffed teddy bears and  starting to place them on a shelf. I stood watching her and acting like I was working on a new Power ranger display beside me. " Heh, you still buying stuff like that?" she giggled.  "Old habits die hard." I answered her quickly and rather dryly. "So, I take it you've moved back into town?" "Yeah, my Folks opened up another cafe in the area around here but I kind of hand a falling out with my dad so I got canned, and here I am."  She said. We fell into a short silence after that not saying a word to each other, the only sounds coming from further out in the store. " Umm, You know I saw you coming inside with that new girl of yours around your arm this morning. What was her name again, Koria?" " Fabia, her partner is Aranaut, a haos like Tigrerra." I answered "Oh I I see. Well, Umm she's cute I can tell you care alot about her by the way you were holding her close to you."  I nodded in achnoledgement not wanting to really talk about this subject. I was half expecting her to ask me to take her back, now only Drago knew that for a while I did want to get back together with her but that had long passed its time, Fabs and I had a really good thing going and I was not about to do anything that would hurt her.  It was just being around her was stirring up all these old emotions and not just the connection we shared but the friend I had also lost. "Runo, I'll be back in a bit I need to get some coffee." with that I took my leave and headed for the front of the store.    "Daniel, you know you can't run forever." Drago said un folding from his marble form infront of me.  "What am I suppose to do Drago act like nothing happened?! You were there you saw how she stabbed me in the back and tossed me aside like a kid does with a broken toy.  "Yes, yes, I know but the aura I sense around her now seems to be someone who just wants her friend back in her life."  I wasn't so sure about that myself,  Or if I could even do something like that Sure Fabia's love had done quite a bit to heal the hurt but Runo's coming back like this had just stirred up so much inside me. I was really trying my best to keep it all inside so as not to lash out or start something.  Up Ahead I saw Fabia talking with Lance, Shun, Aria, and Sora outside the store, No doubt  they had gotten word that Runo was back and working with us.  Now I knew fully well that there was no way around this so I figured that the best thing to do... well I was still figuring out that part.

"Hey Bro, ya  been attacked by any little ankle biters yet?" Sora asked me as she waved me and Drago over. "Me and Aria here were pinned up against a wave of them and angry moms in the bike racks." Lance said. "This day cannot end soon enough I'd much rather take my chances out here in the cold then back in there with those little demons."  Aria said. " You and me both." Agreed Shun. I just nodded in agreement and walked over to Fabia. She smiled at me with that beautiful smile of hers and I did the same back at her. Taking a hold of her I kissed her quickly on the cheek, " Listen, I gotta talk to you in private for a minute do you mind?" I asked her. "No, Not at all."  I walked her down away from the door and around back to the loading docks, it was a bit more sheltered here from the wind and easyer to see thanks to the light. " Everything ok Dan, you seem like something is bothering you."  she asked. Seemed like she could instantly pick up on my mental state which really shouldn't surprise me too much, she did have a sharp mind. "Well... I suppose you've heard this by now but... umm, My old... ex girlfriend Runo..." I started, my thought were a jumble right now as I tryed to find the right words. " She started working here."  Fabia nodded and folded her arms over her chest as she leaned against the metal railing that led up the stairs to the loading dock's door. "I already know, Julie said she saw you with her and that Mucklehoney wanted you to train her how to work here." she said. " Well Yeah."  I could see right away some concerns in her face, her gaze drifted off to the side a bit a cold gust of wind then blew through the area, howling as it did so. "Do you miss her?" She asked. "Huh what was that?" "I asked if you missed her." Fabia asked again this time a bit louder.  To that I wasn't fully sure, I knew not as a girlfriend but as a battle partner and regular friend yes while at the same time still no. "Fabia, you know that I love you right? I will admit I did want Runo back for a while but not anymore. Not after what she did to me." I told her.  "I am not about to throw away everything I have with you or make you go through the same pain I did." I could see that she was still not too sure, in the corners of her eyes I think I saw a few tear drops starting to form and roll down her cheeks, and her crying was the last thing I ever wanted to see. "Fabs come on. I'm telling you the truth here." I said wrapping her in my arms and holding her close to me.  "You know, that night we went out with the others, and we had our little moment in the park that was what made everything clear. I knew that you were the real one I was meant for. I don't care if you are a princess, an alien, human, or what ever else... What I care about is the person in here. Right in here, the Fabia Sheen who made it so I can love another person again. The girl who is also one of the best friends I have ever had or will have."  

Fabia slowly turned her gaze back up to me and smiled, her tears still coming but not out of fear or sadness, her arms slowly found thier way around me and she let out a soft moan. "Dan.  I don't really know what to say to that other then you have taken the place Jin left empty when he died. You saved my planet and entire race when the brawlers came to Nethia. You've been my shoulder to cry on too for so long, and I thank my lucky stars for that every day, When ever I have to head home to Nethia I miss you so much that it hurts. I never want to lose you, ever."  "Don't worry. You never will."  I said. "You won't."  The two of us turned and saw Runo standing there nearby looking down at her boots on the pavement, "Dan, Fabia, I didn't come here to cause any trouble. Really I only came here to... Make things right. You read the note when I gave you Tigrerra as my gift before? I admitted that I wanted you back for a while but soon after that and again just now I realize I don't deserve you back Dan. Maybe I never deserved you at all."  She said. "Runo,"  She held a hand up towards us asking for silence. "All I want now is to be a part of your lives, not as a girlfriend, or a rival but friend and fellow Brawler cause in this time I have missed our friendship, I missed it soo much."   There were no lies in her words Both of us could tell. As the three of us  slowly made our way towards one another Runo reached out her hand again and looked hopeful, "Please, can we just be friends?"   Fabia looked at me with a small smile and nodded, signifying it was ok with her and I was starting to see that no real good came from holding grudges anymore. Very slowly I took hold of her hand and grinned. " Of course."

Suddenly a loud crash came from the parking lot right infront of the store followed by a loud blaring horn and car alarm going off. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHUGHAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY CAR MY CAR YOU IMBECILES WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY BEAUTIFUL CAR?!?!?!?!?!?!!!" Yelled Mr. Mucklehoney. "Baron, remind me to kill you later!!!" Ace snapped. "Note to self, the emergency break is on the left side the gas pedal is on the right, and there is no traction on ice."  The three of us broke into a laugh together, "Well let's go see what Baron has done this time." I said taking Fabia's hand again as she kissed me on the lips.  All and all this Black friday hadn't been so bad. I had gotten one of my old friends back in my life and I had my lovely girlfriend still with me. Not too bad if I say so myself.

The end.
Black friday story part 2 of 2.
well this is the other half of my new short story hope everyone liked it.

Happy Thanksgiving to all!!!

I do not own Bakugan in any way shape or form what so ever.
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"Dan, Dan? Dan come on already!! I know you are awake in there don't pretend like you can't hear me, Let's get a move on already or we're gonna be late!"  Called my little sister, Sora from outside my room, Knocking on my door rather loudly.  Inside however I was laying in my bed all curled up nice and comfy in my sheets desperately trying to fall back to sleep while looking over towards my night stand at my clock radio which was flashing 10 : 49 p.m.  "Nope, not gonna do it, aint gonna happen, don't care if I get fired, don't care if mom blows a gasket I don't care,  I don't care, I am not getting out of bed." I  muttered to myself.  "Is he still asleep in there? Jeez your mom is gonna tear him a new one if he doesn't wake up soon." I heard my best friend and Sora's boyfriend Shun say from outside. "Not to mention Mr. Mucklehoney is gonna hit the roof." Added Lance.  I rolled over in my bed and groaned up at the ceiling in irratation, what in the world did I do to deserve this, this, this torture?  Having to go into work on Black Friday, the busiest damn shopping day of the whole freaking year and of all places a Toy store at that! "Gonna be crawling with little screaming crying demons wanting thier little Christmas presents as soon as they saw them or throwing snit fits..." I muttered. Not to mention I was currently battling a serious case of Indigestion from Dinner earlyer that day. It had been a great meal with my family and friends but I was seriously regretting that last slab of turkey which I just had to slather with extra gravy.  "Drago, Tigrerra, do me a solid and go tell them I am sick and can't work." I said to my partners on my night stand. "Sorry Daniel, That's not gonna happen, besides if we tell them that we'll get in double the trouble from your mother, you know how she loves Black friday." Drago said. "I still cannot believe she is a fan of this hectic day, but then again so was Runo's mom." Tigrerra added.  It was the same thing every year, Mom made dinner, we ate, then went to bed early so we had some fuel in us to get our asses up and help her start her Christmas shopping as soon as the Doors to the stores were open, Aria and Sora didn't mind it so much  but Dad and I HATED it with a passion. Still we had to do it because if mama wasn't happy then no one was happy, Thankfully since the lot of us had our horrible jobs we got out of it in favor for a brand new form of torture, actually working shifts.  

"Here let me try something." said a voice which sounded like an angel to me. Very slightly I watched the door open up and saw 2 shadows enter the room, one human shaped and one a bakugan floating next to it.  As they made thier way towards me I could feel a warmth start to envelop me and a smile make its way over my face. The larger figure, now was slightly more visible in the dim light of the street lights that filtered in through my curtains. I could make out her long silky smooth navy blue hair and slim outline of her figure as she sat down on the edge of my bed, leaning over and down towards me I was soon gifted by the sweet gentle  touch of her lips against my own it had become one of my favorite sensations as well as one of hers.  I slowly rose up into a sitting position and wrapped my arms around her, rubbing her along her back as I did so I felt her do the same with me.  I could feel  my heart beating  deep inside my chest and her as well. Every time I could hold her close to me like this I thanked my lucky stars, I thanked my sister and our friends for bringing us together for giving me a new love.  Sadly our need for Air soon became too great and we had to break away from each other's mouths.  "Heh, heh, heh. I never get tired of that I just love your Kisses." she said to me  "I could say the same thing about yours, Fabs." I chuckled as I turned on the light  and yawned discrietly.  "This early morning stuff is killing me why in the heck can't my Mom just order her crap online?" I asked. "Who in thier right mind wants to go out at this time of night?"   "Well look on the bright side." Fabia said, but stopping soon afterwards lost in thought. "Yeah, and what is the bright side?" I asked her. "Umm, well, uhh, I got nothing." she chuckled.  All I could do was smile and shake my head. "Well we better get going the sooner we get through this hell the sooner it is over." I said grabbing up  Drago and Tigrerra and some clean clothes.   Opening my bed room door I wasn't too surprised to see Sora and the others come flopping over into my room once the door was gone. " Seriously guys, don't you have anything better to do?" I asked. "Well yeah but spying and evesdropping is so much fun though!" Aria chirped.  

Down in the Kitchen I could hear Mom   complaining about us losing time as well as Dad trying to keep her calm.  I very rapidly did what I needed to in the shower and threw on my uniform before sliding down the banister into the living room. "Well its about time Daniel!!! For once can't you be ready to head out ahead of schedule like your sister?!" Mom said as she flipped through a mountain of newspaper coupons and  catalogs she had been collecting since Halloween. "It's bad enough I only have your Father today to help me get stuff  I can't afford to miss out on these deals, if I do my whole holiday shopping mojo will be thrown off." "And the whole universe will come to a screeching halt if that happens." I whispered to Drago and Tigrerra.  The two of them  chuckled softly as to not let Mom hear them. "SORA! GAYLE!  ARIA! PANZER! GET YOUR ASSES DOWN HERE AND OUT TO THE DRIVE WAY PRONTO!!!!" Mom yelled.  Both of them came rocketing into the living room followed closely by Shun, Lance and Fabia. After that we were rapidly shoved out the door into the freezing cold night air. You could see  quite a few other people who were also making their way out into the chaos that was sure to be Black Friday all of them seeking the best deals they could on stuff that they could probably do with out and honestly didn't even need all to save a few bucks. "I never will understand these humans no matter how long I live amongst them." Gayle said. "They are a most unusual race of creatures. They complain about things such as lack of sleep and the cold for the most part. Yet they still  go through with activities such as this which bring them into conflict with them."  Hawktor added. "Well its not like Vestals, Neathians, or Gundalians make much more sense either." Aranaut said, Terraroid nodded in agreement. " Hey, you do realize that we're standing right here." Lance said.  " Same could be said about you Bakugan really, your whole existance doesn't make much sense. You're huge giant monsters one minute then the next  you are plastic marbles that fit into a teenager's pocket." Fabia  smerked. "Plus the only real way you can battle is if you have a human or other sort of partner to do it with."   I added as I fumbled around with my keys to open the lock to my Van. " Ok guys Pile in, and be quick about it freezing my tail off here."   I called. The others each took thier seats as the engine revved to life. Fabia was up front with me while  Lance and Aria took the middle, Sora and Shun were riding with mom and dad in thier car,  sad to say but my little sister didn't exactly think I was the best driver in the world, but who was she to talk, she had failed her driver's ed test 10 times already!  "Ok ladies and gentlemen, and Bakugans.  Sit down, buckle up, and  hold on to your butts cause here we Go!!!"   I said, peeling out of the drive way and down the street.  "Whoa! Wha!! Gah!! Dan, watch the road! Oh left turn! Right! left right right No your other right!!!" Drago growled from his place on the dash board  watching as the headlights of other vehicles  shone in on us. "Oh come on Buddy not afraid of a little traffic are ya?!" I joked. " The traffic no, you behind the wheel of a car, yes!"  he said.  Really I only did that to get a little rise out of the others, soon afterwards I smoothed out and got serious. " How in the heck did you ever get a driver's lisence ya drive like a maniac!!" Aria panted. " I think I just lost like 10 years of my life just now." Lance said. "Ahh man you guys are whimps." I said " Not like anyone got hurt just now."  Fabia  turned and looked my way with a  slight glare, her hand on her chest trying to steady her  heart some after the fright she had. "You ever do anything like that again Dan Kuso and I will personally drop kick you to Neathia and back again." she said.  "Ahh no ya won't ya love me too much to do that." I said which made her sigh and roll her eyes. "You're lucky that you're right, ya crazy bastard." she  thought to herself.   Beforewe could head out to the mall and to our own personal nightmare, we had to pick up a few more of our friends.  I blew on my horn as we pulled up to Jake's house. "Hey rise and shine sleeping beauties   " Dan Kuso's  super speedy  shuttle service" is here!!" I called.  The others  started to laugh at my joke while the door opened. Jake  and Coredem were the first ones out followed by Ren and Linehalt. then Marucho, Preyas, Elfin, and Akiwamos and Julie and Gorem brought up the rear. "Dan the man with a big red van!!" Jake  called  Happily, climbing up into the back and giving me and lance a few fist bumps as he did so. " Oh boy tight squeeze." Ren  gasped  "No one breath, Jake here wolfed down  3 bean burritos before you got here. Try not to hit any bumps Ok Dan." He  added.  Lance and Aria erupted into laughter  while I sweat dropped,  "Alright alright enough chatter will ya let's get this  show on the road, I'm freezing here!" Julie  growled  " Missing out on 3 crutial hours of beauty sleep.. Mucklehoney better know I am putting in for overtime for today."   "Alright alright we're going already."

By the time we got to the mall, the parking lot was all but filled to the brim with people  and the doors weren't even  open yet. I could hear them complaining about the wait and the cold, all the while I dreaded   stepping through those sliding glass doors, all I wanted to do was get through my shift as soon as I could, get away from here, and curl up on the couch with Fabia  by the Fire place.  That was my idea of how to spend black friday, we eventually found a place to park on the 7th floor of the parking garage, right at the very top and the place where the wind was the coldest. " Yeeesh!! Who ordered the arctic blasts?!" I  asked  stepping out side and blowing on my hands, even through the gloves, the cold found its way through.  Just as we were making our way towards the  doors a pair of headlights caught us along with a siren. "FREEZE DIRTBAGS!!!" yelled a familier voice.  " Baron come on its too cold and too early for this." Fabia  said. The lights turned down and the  duo shown to be driving the security cart was none other then Ace and Baron. The two of them had recently gotten fired from thier job at Grub bucket in the food court when Baron set the kitchen on fire and only recently gotten on with mall security. "What kind of screening process did they have for mall guards, if they gave Baron a badge it must not of been too hard. " Ren asked  "Tell me about it." Lance said.  "Heh I don't envy you guys,  I heard Mucklehoney has quite the work load for his staff today." Ace grinned "Yeah but what about you? You gotta ride around with Brainless Baron here all day so it's not like you got the golden ticket either." I  snipped back.  Ace looked crest fallen, his gaze looking back at Baron who was clearly a little too enthusiastic about his new job.  "Yeah I know it's like a never ending nightmare. Knew I should of gone to work for Keith with Mira." He said.  "Hey Dan, by Any chance is your Mom still umm Mad at me for, ya know  the Over flowing Toilet incident of yesterday?"  Baron asked. I didn't even answer him, I just  did my best to surpress the Memory and walked away while wishing Ace all the luck I could cause he was going to need it.

"Well, lets get this over with." I said clocking in and heading into the store. I could hear the sounds of customers outside in the dark,  pounding on the glass and chanting for us to open up. I also spied Shun and Sora up ahead both of them looking pretty  overwhelmed at the task ahead. "Look at them all. I don't think I've ever seen it this bad." Sora said. "Easy there Babe, I got cha covered." Shun said. Thankfully they were on the loading docks, un loading the trucks that must of come in earlyer that night. "Be strong Sis, we'll get through this. we may be trampled, we may be  beaten up, heck we may even be bitten by a kid or 2 dozen but we will make it through." I said.  "Oh Dan! Mucklehoney wants to see you in his Office right now!" called Aria  walking past towards the front door. I didn't hesitate to get a move on, making a bee line for the wooden doors over to my right and threw them.  "Umm you wanted to see me Sir?" I asked as I opened the door and walked inside. Behind his desk sorting through piles and piles of papers sat Mr. Mucklehoney, his bald head shone brightly against the  flouresent lights, and his mouth clamped tightly around a cigarette. "Sit on down, David!  I need to have a talk with you." He said  "Umm It's Dan sir." I corrected him. "That's what I said Drew! What are ya repeating me for?!  I got a very special assignment for you today."   silently I was  groaning, wondering what it could be and praying with all my might that it wasn't getting dressed up and having to  dance around like a moron in the parking lot like Jake was right about now to draw in customers. " I got a new stocker starting today, and I want you to train her, considering you're one of the best I have, Derrek."  Mr. Mucklehoney said, blowing out a puff of smoke at me. "A new stocker sir? Is that really a good idea, and on black Friday of all days?"   I asked. "You telling me how to do my job Darius?! I have been in this game for over 25 years now and I know that more employees means my  store will stay stocked better and I can  stay open  longer. Plus it means more people will want to come and spend thier money here instead of those other places around town!  But if you would rather Devin, I can alway scrounge up another costume and put you out there with Jackson in the parking lot to draw customers in."

"You mean Jake sir, and no I I will do what ever you say. You want this person trained I will get her trained."  "Good. The New girl is named Rachel, or Ruthy, or what ever. Just get to work already and get outta my office, time is Money, and if you're wasting time then you are wasting money!"  I didn't say another word as I  left Mucklehoney's office. "Grouchy old bastard, why the fuck can't he ever get our names right?!" I cursed. This day had just gone from bad to worse and little did I know it was only starting. " So, you're the one who is suppose to train me? Heh surprise, surprise."  Said the voice of someone I honestly never ever expected to see again. Turning to my right I felt my jaw drop slightly. "Heh been a long time hasn't it Dan?"  "R, R, Runo?"
Black Friday story Part 1 of 2.
Hey guys!!! ugh the first chance I have had to write in a long time now!^^ I know I have an LBX story in the works but that is taking longer then I expected.  I will get it done soon I promise but until the I hope you will enjoy this little 2 parter.

Thanksgiving is tomorrow and after that is Black Friday, the busiest shopping day of the year. I thought maybe I can have some fun with this and see how it goes. This is kind of connected to my Christmas story I did last year that did so well, which I am also planning a sequel for hopefully.

I hope you like it, part 2 should be up tomorrow or later tonight sometime.

I DO NOT  own any rights to Bakugan in any way shape of form what so ever.

Sora and Gayle belong to my friend Solar sensei,

Aria and Panzer are OC's I made for my Friend Mimzy

 Lance and Terraroid are my own OC's
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Well If I had to grade it so far I would have to say Dino charge gets an A in my opinion. the fights are fun and engaging, the monsters are unique and the Actors are believeable in their roles.  I Just caught the last 2 episodes of the first half recently and I am eagerly awaiting part 2.

I will say that I am a tad upset to see Sledge get defeated so soon though I liked the idea of a bounty hunter villain but who knows perhaps he isn't totally done yet, he could come back sometime in Supercharge.

If not we got Heckyl/Snide as a villain. Not sure what to make of him yet but from what I saw from Heckyl he is Extremely strong and could be quite a villain. There are 2 energems left to find and I am eager to see who the Silver and Aqua rangers will be.

so Who else thinks Supercharge will be as epic as the first half? I sure hope so at least.

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Hobbies: Writing, reading, playing card games, watching TV, drawing, going on long walks, hanging out with my pals.

Likes: Women, Food, good old time music, comedy, werewolves, dragons, Tigers, Animals.

Dislikes: Rap music, veggies, people who get a kick out of seeing others in pain. conflict.

Favorite TV shows: Pokemon,Two and a half men, Mike and Molly, Power rangers, VR Troopers, Kamen rider dragon knight, Beyblade, Bakugan, Lost Tapes, Crocodile hunter, only in America with Larry the cable guy, American chopper Naruto.

I am basicly a big kid at heart, and i don't plan on changing that any time soon. I love to have a good time and am willing to try anything once. I am very close to my Father and i treasure that greatly. As well as my Best friend Zach Skidmore, he's also like my older brother because he's always got my back and I've got his.

I love to write fanfiction and i even write some of my own stories too. In fanfictions i love romance, horror, adventure, and crossovers.

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You walk into the woods hunting a deer you shot and find it dead and as you are about take it back to camp until you hear sound behind you and turn around to see a bigfoot creature coming right at you

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It's still Season 3 of MM but called the Second Half
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If you have a minute I'd like to talk to you about your lbx story.
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ok what cha need?
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What if my guy lost damocles and had to get another lbx called bahamut?
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hemm nice idea give me the specs please.
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Kamenridersamurai Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
holy moly now that is a monster!
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crb145 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2016
Apparently he might have been the fith Omni dragon. Lord before tenbu came in
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Kamenridersamurai Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
hemm interesting idea.
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